well inn my book mark is in a mysterious place that is all red. But he has been going scouting and he has been going at night to find new lands. Well i think that is brave because i would not go walking around in the woods at night for somthing to eat me. Well it all started when mark was staying in the canyon and he was getting ready to put up his tent and he was looking at the stars. Buthe happend to notice that a red light went across the sky and it landed on the canyon wall. So mark went over to see what it was and it was a red light that was a ball. So when mark went over there and a snake bit him and he fell into the light. So thats how he ended up in the red land.
In the story Mark was was looking for a new place to go because he dosent want to get attacked or something and while he was looking around he saw a place that has red grass still and the trees were smaller and the weird part was that the leaves were an orange tint on them. Mark didnt want to stay there because he was afraid that he would die or he wouldnt find any food resources or any water so Mark went back to the forest/anominous place. When Mark found an arrow sitting against the tree he was curious of who it was but he took it anyways but thats a good thing because when he heard a noise he tried to listen to were the creature was so he walked around and finally he saw the creature and Mark noticed that the creature was on his hine legs trying to eat another animal he thought so Mark decided to pull out the arrow and shoot the creature and the Howling beast turned around and charged after him and jumped on top of him and......... he killed him the only reason he killed him was that he jabbed into but accidentily and went through his heart and if the Howling beast thing didnt get stabbed in the heart then Mark would of been dead so he was happy about that and Mark also decided to make other arrows so just in case he comes to that situation again.
Wll i can see that you said more things than i did and you said alot more stuff that is in the book and i hardly said anything. I didnt even say anything about the howling beast. but good thinking DJ
you spelled will wrong because you said "wll" but it is fine. thanks man i liked yours too!!! It was short but it was a good short :) i also liked how you described the place and what he saw nice thinking man :)
DJ and Floyd - I'm seeing a lot of summarizing here which is great, but I need to see more of your thinking. What do you think will happen next? How do you think this new planet (or whatever it is) is affecting Mark? What kind of mood do you think the author is trying to give with his descriptions of the setting? THINK!
well inn my book mark is in a mysterious place that is all red. But he has been going scouting and he has been going at night to find new lands. Well i think that is brave because i would not go walking around in the woods at night for somthing to eat me. Well it all started when mark was staying in the canyon and he was getting ready to put up his tent and he was looking at the stars. Buthe happend to notice that a red light went across the sky and it landed on the canyon wall. So mark went over to see what it was and it was a red light that was a ball. So when mark went over there and a snake bit him and he fell into the light. So thats how he ended up in the red land.
ReplyDeletenice job man!!! but theres one thing you wrote the wrong story!!!! Lol its fine man you did good!
DeleteIn the story Mark was was looking for a new place to go because he dosent want to get attacked or something and while he was looking around he saw a place that has red grass still and the trees were smaller and the weird part was that the leaves were an orange tint on them. Mark didnt want to stay there because he was afraid that he would die or he wouldnt find any food resources or any water so Mark went back to the forest/anominous place. When Mark found an arrow sitting against the tree he was curious of who it was but he took it anyways but thats a good thing because when he heard a noise he tried to listen to were the creature was so he walked around and finally he saw the creature and Mark noticed that the creature was on his hine legs trying to eat another animal he thought so Mark decided to pull out the arrow and shoot the creature and the Howling beast turned around and charged after him and jumped on top of him and......... he killed him the only reason he killed him was that he jabbed into but accidentily and went through his heart and if the Howling beast thing didnt get stabbed in the heart then Mark would of been dead so he was happy about that and Mark also decided to make other arrows so just in case he comes to that situation again.
ReplyDeleteWll i can see that you said more things than i did and you said alot more stuff that is in the book and i hardly said anything. I didnt even say anything about the howling beast. but good thinking DJ
Deleteyou spelled will wrong because you said "wll" but it is fine. thanks man i liked yours too!!! It was short but it was a good short :) i also liked how you described the place and what he saw nice thinking man :)
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ReplyDeleteDJ and Floyd - I'm seeing a lot of summarizing here which is great, but I need to see more of your thinking. What do you think will happen next? How do you think this new planet (or whatever it is) is affecting Mark? What kind of mood do you think the author is trying to give with his descriptions of the setting? THINK!
ReplyDeletethank you for the tip! and i will. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the idea and i will try to do that next time i do it.
ReplyDeleteDo it now! :)
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Deletethis also sounds like a good book
ReplyDeleteWell it is i think you should read it kyle.
DeleteI know right you should of read it you silly goose. LOL
Deletesilly goose? really?
Deleteelsewhere is a good book was your guyses a go book?
ReplyDeletemrs bohley what did you think about elswhere and the other books?
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